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Help for Sandra’s WIP

July 21, 2010 by Nicole 6 Comments

My friend Sandra sent me this e-mail and I promised I’d post it to see if anyone has some clever ideas : )

Hi Nic
I am rewriting a few stuff for my other book called Love Fades?
What is worse than betrayal?
My take is apathy or revenge (the concept is when you seek revenge, dig two graves)
Can you ask others as well so I can have some ideas to work with?
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  1. Suzi McGowen says

    July 21, 2010 at 10:44 pm

    Abandonment? (It's kind of like apathy, though.)
    Violence/Domestic Abuse/Rape

    Hmm…that's all I've got at the moment.

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  2. subservient-husband says

    July 21, 2010 at 10:54 pm

    tee, hee, hee…… Okay here it goes….

    20 fresh jalapeños
    kneeling on rice
    hog tied, blindfolded, left overnight
    hot wax
    good ol caning
    binder clips to the skin

    and my personal favorite

    the violet wand
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Violet_wand

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  3. Vicki Rocho says

    July 22, 2010 at 1:35 am

    Well you have your garden variety betrayal, but when it's with a friend/relative it's sooo much worse.

    I'm thinking maybe mind games could be worse…if they deliberately manipulate you into doing/believing something to serve their own purposes.

    Complete indifference (maybe the same as apathy?) could be horrible if the other party is still smitten.

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  4. Sharon K. Mayhew says

    July 22, 2010 at 3:47 am

    Abuse…self abuse…the death of a child or spouse…That's all I can think of. 🙁

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  5. Bethany Elizabeth says

    July 22, 2010 at 9:43 am

    Apathy fits the title better, but it really depends on the characters. I'm more of panster writer myself, but probably the best way to go is to write out the characters and figure out their relationship first. Then decide which of those three – betrayal, apathy, revence – would have the most impact.

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  6. Aubrie says

    July 22, 2010 at 12:11 pm

    Worse than betrayal? Maybe when the MC has brought it upon himself or herself: caused it to happen.

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