I’ve been getting reviews back from Beta readers as mentioned in the previous couple of posts and I was pretty excited to get my first review back from a boy!! ; p The review made my eyebrows shoot up. Almost everything he questioned was different to the previous reviews. So I thought I’d write up my own wildly unscientific theory on it all *grin* Here are my thoughts. Boys like blueprints. The first monster description according to my male reviewer needs to be more detailed. This reminded me of how my father loves the Jean Auel’s Earth Children series. The intense descriptions completely … [Read more...]